Use your brainstorming notes and topic sentences from Activity 7 to write a paragraph below. Please be sure that the topic sentence guides the whole paragraph.#mr.ford
A place I woud like to visit one day - Australia Australia is the place I want to meet one day because I have some friends living there and everyone loves. The climate, the landscape, people and culture called my attention and I would know. I love the beach, sun, sports sailors, and beautiful women, so I think this would be the ideal place for me to know. This is the lifestyle I want to live one day.
Nowadays, there are many things that you can do on your cell phone. People use cell phone to communication with other people. It can make every things easier than before that people used to contact each other by mail. Evolution developed it to be higher technology and that what we call " Smart Phone".
First, people can do anything that they want to do on the smart phone. You can watch movies, TV. Program or listen musics while you are doing something in your routine. You can play games with your friends, sharing pictures, video or face time to get people closer and do many things fun together.
Moreover, you can pay you bill everywhere by using internet on you cell phone to connect it. You don't have to go to the store and pay bill by your self. Besides, you can also shopping online on the website which they have shopping online service. It is very easy to use you cell phone compare the price of stuffs that you want to buy online.
Application on smart phone is the awesome thing that can change our society. You can download many interesting applications into you smart phone and do everything that you want to do. Some people said " It is basic factor that everyone should has it.
Finally, there are many things that you can do on cell phone. It change our life style and our society to be easier. People can get closer and do a lot of things fun each other. It will become the thing that everybody has to have one.
Here are some reasons to dangers of going to the beach. There are many organisms live like sharks, jelly fishes, deep-sea fishes, and so on, and downing is one reason of danger of going to the beach. Every year, many people dies in the beach in these reasons, so I think going to the beach have many dangers.
A place I woud like to visit one day - Australia
ReplyDeleteAustralia is the place I want to meet one day because I have some friends living there and everyone loves.
The climate, the landscape, people and culture called my attention and I would know.
I love the beach, sun, sports sailors, and beautiful women, so I think this would be the ideal place for me to know.
This is the lifestyle I want to live one day.
Leandro
Thanks for being the first student to hand in your assignment.#mr.ford
DeleteHow cell phones are changing our society?
ReplyDeleteNowadays, there are many things that you can do on your cell phone. People use cell phone to communication with other people. It can make every things easier than before that people used to contact each other by mail. Evolution developed it to be higher technology and that what we call " Smart Phone".
First, people can do anything that they want to do on the smart phone. You can watch movies, TV. Program or listen musics while you are doing something in your routine. You can play games with your friends, sharing pictures, video or face time to get people closer and do many things fun together.
Moreover, you can pay you bill everywhere by using internet on you cell phone to connect it. You don't have to go to the store and pay bill by your self. Besides, you can also shopping online on the website which they have shopping online service. It is very easy to use you cell phone compare the price of stuffs that you want to buy online.
Application on smart phone is the awesome thing that can change our society. You can download many interesting applications into you smart phone and do everything that you want to do. Some people said " It is basic factor that everyone should has it.
Finally, there are many things that you can do on cell phone. It change our life style and our society to be easier. People can get closer and do a lot of things fun each other. It will become the thing that everybody has to have one.
Benzo, best work to date!!!! Awesome!#mr.ford
Delete-Some dangers of going to the beach-
ReplyDeleteHere are some reasons to dangers of going to the beach. There are many organisms live like sharks, jelly fishes, deep-sea fishes, and so on, and downing is one reason of danger of going to the beach. Every year, many people dies in the beach in these reasons, so I think going to the beach have many dangers.
Great job Liz! Check your subject- verb agreement.
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